Well done, Matthew. Your writing had some vivid descriptions and you did a good job creating a tense mood. I like the way you included some precise and descriptive vocabulary too. Next time, remember to check you are using full stops, commas and apostrophes to make your sentences sound clearer.
Well done, Matthew. Your writing had some vivid descriptions and you did a good job creating a tense mood. I like the way you included some precise and descriptive vocabulary too. Next time, remember to check you are using full stops, commas and apostrophes to make your sentences sound clearer.
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